Sam! I have climbed high enough to be able to write on this remarkable piece of visionary writing. It is an incredible literary production . You have packed so much plausible details in a few short pages.. first perfect setting time place and occasion. The virloggers journey is the perfect anchor motivation to moor the story. The narrator seems your alter ego, displaying great interviewing skills. Oh, the subtlies mixed in with the splendors! Your own mind must be simply amazing to encompass all this knowledge!! Compassion and insight are constantly in flower, ignorance, cynicism, anger, and dispair are entirely absent, a true utopian vision. Perhaps your own history your own mind are citizens there as well? I catch references to places you've been there. Even to friends of my own family (the Echohawks)....
Well those continued efforts are what I and all your happy readers hope for!
Note: I just made a few minor spelling error corrections and some connector word inseetions at the top few lines of the review. Didn't add or subtract any sentences. I hate my proofreading misses! And I make so many of them.
Sam! I have climbed high enough to be able to write on this remarkable piece of visionary writing. It is an incredible literary production . You have packed so much plausible details in a few short pages.. first perfect setting time place and occasion. The virloggers journey is the perfect anchor motivation to moor the story. The narrator seems your alter ego, displaying great interviewing skills. Oh, the subtlies mixed in with the splendors! Your own mind must be simply amazing to encompass all this knowledge!! Compassion and insight are constantly in flower, ignorance, cynicism, anger, and dispair are entirely absent, a true utopian vision. Perhaps your own history your own mind are citizens there as well? I catch references to places you've been there. Even to friends of my own family (the Echohawks)....
What an effort! None could have done it better!
You're simply awesome!
Wow!!! What can I possibly say to that?! Well...thank you so much! Your incredibly kind and encouraging words help inspire me to keep writing!
Well those continued efforts are what I and all your happy readers hope for!
Note: I just made a few minor spelling error corrections and some connector word inseetions at the top few lines of the review. Didn't add or subtract any sentences. I hate my proofreading misses! And I make so many of them.
This is good stuff! Still reading it! More later!